The Odon

[Inertial_Fey]

pronouced (Oh-Don), for anyone who's wondering...

The Odon are milirtisticly good Lion people of Amael.
Odon appear as tall humaniods with the head and mane of a lion, their body is covered in golden fur.
Odon are modest but lively, they enjoy good food and song, but they are most excited over fighting evil and helping good. Odon unfortunetly rarely see the full implications of thier actions or of their situation; An Odon will attack a sleeping red dragon simply because its evil but never realize that its presence gave aninimity to a near by village from bandits.
The Odon were once a peaceful, prosperous people. many years ago they were attacked by an strange mysterious army known as Daidom, this army which used trained humaniod tribes from the surface forced the Odon out of their sky kingdom and slaughtering their population. The Odon used their magic to propel their remaining floating cities to neiboring allied kingdoms. Since then the Odon have raised a massive army to gain back the kingdom they lost, this war has gone on for nearly a century.

Stats:

-+2 Str +2 Char -2 Int Odon are strong and persvasive but are very short sighted.
-Speed 30 ft
-Native Outsiders
-Darkvision
-immune to fear
-Spell like abilty: Bless once per day, detect evil at will
-+2 to deplomacy checks
-Automatic weapon profitioncies: Great sword
-Level ajustments: +2

[Sargon]

LA +2 1 think

there stats are unbalanced. a negitiave to a mental state should be balalnced with a positive to a mental stat, and you have that with the -2 int +2 cha

but the same rule applies for the physical stat, there is where you unbalanced it.
but even that would not warrent a +1 without other reasons

dakrvision, not too powerful and dosent matter i belive.

immune to fear would but this squarely at a +1

spell like abilitis, bless and detect good, not the MOST useful thing in the world, but it still means soemthing, but i dont think that alone is enough to put it at a +2

as for the skill bouns and the longsword, those dont really even matter when putting figureing LA, so if it is at all possible i would put them at a +1 1/2, but since thats not possible.

i think 1 should be fine, maybe a +2 to be on the safe side...

jam like seomthing else in there, like an increase to running speed when they are on all 4s (lions can move for those of you that didnt know)

and it most definetly would put them at a +2

[Inertial_Fey]

The are lion-like humaniods! not lions!

Stop trying to make all my races qudrapeds!!!!

STAB!

[Lord Kain]

Looking over it I'd say +1 LA.
A few questions if their not humaniods then is there type animal? do they walk on all fours and lack thumbs? If so then no LA and there is no possible way they could have an empire of any kind with out thumbs

[Inertial_Fey]

No, they are humaniods, with thumbs.

They dont run on all fours.

[Lord Kain]

well your post above was a bit confusing,

[Sargon]

yes, he imedalty focuesd on thinking that i want to turn them in to qudrapeds

illistrated with the sentance
"Stop trying to make all my races qudrapeds!!!"

when in fact if you READ my post, one would realive that i want trying to make them qudrapeds at all!

its simply calarifaction i want with soem of these things.

[Inertial_Fey]

Ok, I edited the Odon's stats making them an even +2, now onto the rest!

History:
The Odon are bi-pedal desendance from Draginna once lived peacefully in a plane of air and goodplane single floating city known now as Odonalic.
When Odon began leaving their homes to travel the multiverse they used their powers for good, which eventually drew the attention of the Rakshasa.
The Rakshasa, who grew fearful of the Odons natural ability to bless weapons began slaughtering the Odon mercilessly. The Rakshasa could not breach the Odons boarders and worked to attempt to throw the Odon city in the negative energy plane to swiftly kill all of the Odon.
The Odon mages worked swifty to change the course of the planeshift and sent them to Amael.
The Odon resided in Amael sky three thosand years after the coming of the and created an entire empire within that time before loosing to the Daidom.